Davi Jones: Brett Garsed DiMarzio shred this III - Devons finest

Davi Jones is from South Molton in Devon, UK... ah I know it so well!

Davi Jones:
My shred this three entry, first time i've done a solo competition. Quite pleased with the way the first half turned but I thought I over did the chromatic ending =S oh wells, any tips or help that could help me improve melodic soloing is greatly appreciated!

shred this 3 entry

Shred This III: Brett Garsed and DiMarzio competition ends 23:00 (GMT) Sunday, August 15th